Alice Macher wrote:Zanosuke Kurosaki wrote:I thought it was pretty good for something that felt like you'd come up with it on the spot, Alice. I mean, I got that impression, that you kind of just let fly with the words to see where it took you. Improv can't have every line be a total winner.
I was talking about the whole song that several people urged me to expand it into. As I said, it really works more in its original, limited context.
Ok someone else manip something now please >.< *squirms*
...oh. (and here I was meaning the original bit. I'm gonna go crawl under my desk now...)