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Reflections [fic]

PostPosted: Tue Mar 15, 2011 3:16 am
by pawnpusher
Hi all!

Just registered to post the following. It popped into my head just yesterday and I had to share it:

Reflections

Can you hear it?
The pounding of my heart every time you draw near.
Is this the love of a lifetime?
Time will tell.

But...
Right here,
Right now,
You are the star about which my world revolves.

You are the fire that burns within me.


I'm not usually a poet, so I don't know how good a first attempt this is (constructive critiques welcomed!).